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MH16: All I Want

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Here's my new song! :-)
I wanted to make a song with mostly piano in it. And i did that.
I hope you like the end result, and if you do, please let me know why by writing a review. I also appreciate it if you don't like it and write a review, but please be constructive ;-)
So please rate, review and (hopefully) enjoy!

MH16

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Thanks go to Gravey for his helpful review! Because of that review, i made my song better.

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I made some chances again. This time it's because of blackattackbitch's review and i want to thank him again for writing it. Thanks blackattackbitch! :D

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Feeling

Sorry I haven't been around to show my support,"But I do feel this track".I can hear those little signature keys.

Keep on!

FairSquare responds:

Thanks :-)

Great Song...

Your musical sense is honestly superb but I think if you could mix the instruments and drums better you could get some DL's instead of just listens and votes. Like I said the progressions and everything are awesome but the set doesn't really fit all that well. some FX and mixing could really bring things together. there needs to be similar elements to each one of your instruments that way your instruments become assimilated and sound more unison. that signature little trill thing you do is awesome though, gives it a nice chill oriental feel. great song, 5'd, now lets see if you can get me to dl a song of yours ;)

Keep up the good work, can't wait to hear the next one!
-Marlon Brando

FairSquare responds:

Thanks for the compliment ^^
And i'll really try to get a download from you and pay LOTS of attention to the drums, because i know you like that ;-)
Well, thanks for the awesome review Marlon. I really appreciate it!

hehe

It's very nice. I just don't like that underlying paddy string thing at the start. It gets on my nerves. Other then that. This song deserves a 9. It could have been a little bit better but the melody was awesome. Also that flute was well placed. I think the synths you used where a tad mediocre, maybe get edirol orchestra or do some heavy mastering. I listened to this once without headphones and then again with them. The environment was much better with more immersion and you could notice the reverberation much better.

Well, good work. Keep it up! :D

FairSquare responds:

Well, i already have Edirol and the strings you hear are from Edirol :P
And i actually like the synths i used, but i guess that's just a matter of personal opinion.
Anyway, thanks for this review! :D

You've developed your style

Hi there.
Yes, definitively your songs have a sort of MH16's own style. Somehow it's recognizable that you wrote it. Interesting, as usual. :-)

Have you thought of uploading more videos wiht your songs in YOUTUBE? Perhaps a collab with someone?

FairSquare responds:

Hmm, i don't know. I like it more when people make pictures in their heads and use their imagination in stead of watching a video with a song. But the idea is nice and i'll think about it :-)
Thanks for the review! :D

Gravey is good for good advice....

You may want a fuller-sounding string section, as it would probably blend better with the song.

The melodies in this song are very creative, and I thoroughly enjoyed this song.

Sorry if this review comes out short, I've been short on words for my reviews lately.

There isn't much I can think of to say for this song for some reason. The drums are amazing as always, the piano sounds excellent, and the chords are well-placed.

Now that I think about it though, for about 32 bars (the middle section), you might want to introduce a little variety. For that section, none of the instruments change except for the piano playing a slightly advanced melody. It causes it to get a bit draggy.

Overall, I'd give it a 9.4/10. Nice job man. Like the title too!

FairSquare responds:

Haha, don't worry about your review being too short. That you don't have many words is a good thing, because that means you didn't have to explain what is wrong so much :P
Anyway, i'll look into making the strings more powerful, but i have to be careful that they don't become TOO powerful :P
And i'll try your other advice too by adding a little more variation :-) And thanks for the compliment on the title ^^
Thanks for the review!

Credits & Info

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Listens
1,987
Faves:
2
Downloads
65
Votes
11
Score
4.68 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 21, 2009
2:52 PM EDT
File Info
Song
5.2 MB
2 min 16 sec

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