Okay,,,
It's not bad, but it's a little odd. Let me recommend a few things first:
-Do not use FL Studio presets. I can hear the Dance pack stuff, and thats old, it doesn't sound all that good anymore. Update your percussion library!
-Make sure that if you use preset arps that they sound right with other arps. Some of the arp-gate combo's you used are a little off key and off sync with each other at some times.
The Good:
-I like some of the effects that you used! The sort of high-picthed whistley thing that sounds like a break, it's really good!
-The percussion samples weren't great, however the sequencing on them was good.
So, i do recommend you read my recommendations to fix this song up a bit.
It was good though! 7/10 and 5/5.