Not bad...
It's my kind of music that I enjoy. Maybe you should continue working on this song so it can be a little better. Since I don't have proper tools to make music I can at least recommend you some things that should be added to it.
Okay, make this song longer (should know that). I heard the *ching ching* which should right after be a bigger "crowd favorite" thing. What I mean by that is, make a bigger atmospheric sound onto it. Like a bomb. :P
This sounds to be a very good war song. I'd add some gun sounds, maybe some bombs. Then the finale should be the crowed cheering and all that good stuff..
Hope I helped.. If you finish it make sure you give me a PM sometime.