i epsicially liked the "do you think you can handle" verse coz to me it sounds like a jonathan davis and chester bennington combination, keep up the gd work
This song doesn't get killed, it fucking kills!
Truely amazing sound, though long it works all the way and there is nothing better than a great song thats also long <3
Love the lyrics, especially the rap piece, and the "breathe in or somebody dies", overall great lyrics, exciting, different music that surprises every other second through the entire 5,5 minutes! ;)
RESPECT to you mate, and a lotta love!!
This was your best song to date, first off i will say the knew things that were knew and whether they worked or not!
Well first that struck me was the tone cahnge in the Intro, it seemed a lot less meaty than the rest of the Song, which was fantastic, its always great to have a more changing Tone.
"I want to leave the paragraph above behind but the fear of dieing is to big"
haha, nah i just mean that was great.
Another thing which i liked was the New Screaming, which yo puled off very well, it fitted which the changing Rhythm and pace of the song and was actually really good.
Well you added plenty of effects to the vocal aspect, which was great, quiet with loud and quiet whispering singing Etc. and yeah this was great.
The Chorus was actually great all transitions in and out of this were Perfect ;)
The Ending was great, this were pretty fast and you ended it pretty quickly which fitted with Tempo of the song.
It also worked well if you were trying to loop it, you would not have to sounds mashed together.
If you want the song to loop again, it doesn't mash up to parts of a song up
My only problem if that you never really continued the song into a pivotal moment, a fast progressing point, there was always, stopping and starting, which although builds tension, and continues with the original plot of the song, it never really gives the feel of the middle part of the song.
All i can say is that this was definitely your best work, giving out all the right ideas, and all working well to create a legendary piece of Metal!
Keep up the Good Work!
your loyal fan :P
yet again thanks chris ;)
and you're indeed right about the stopping and starting. it somhow lacks a continuing feeling. if maybe I put a direct leap from the speedy part to the "I'm suicidal" part, and made the second chorous repeat once more. I think it could improove it. :)
I will look at it :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.