Crank those guitars man! They where kinda quiet and therefore it sounded to me like they lost some power and impact. Great organ, bell and vocal use, reminded me of a Deathklok song...
Only real suggestion is to amp up the guitar elements and maybe the volume level as a whole. Good work, keep it up.
Awesome song. Very Persuading.
I like it =]
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.