I don't know...
I don't know if i liked or not... the start was bored but after was good and the end so good!!! I don't know why you want change the end.
i dont really want to change the end i just want to add to it so i can make an ending, because it just kinda drops out, and yeah the intro is pretty long i might shorten it... thanks for the comment!
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