Nothing too interesting, but it stands decent!
There's not much pizazz going through the song, sure the melody was good, but I could not grow attached to this piece, I dozed off into space halfway through the song! The Hip-Hop noise in the beginning was unnecessary, and the ending was weak, and unsatisfying to my ears.
In between those two cons the song had much potential, but there was little progression, and the song ended just as quickly to it. It stands decent, but nothing too original, and interesting.
Keep at your composing, and think outside the box! ~.^