Needs to sound better
OK so this one was interesting it did seem abit "SCRATCHY" throughout the track and seemed abit low in sound quality, you had some nice "CHIMES" and a good beat but the mic quality seemed to ruin it, so this is something you could possibly try working on for improvment, give it a try and see some better results, anyways good luck on your next entry.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I believe a better mic, and hight sound quality would help on this greatly.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.