Good quality Quartet.
Very good, the quality of the playback is decent and the composing itself shows a good level of competence, did I listen to your other wing quarter? I forget what score I gave it, but this sounds like an 8.
some point, and these don't effect the score:
the author's comment; for god sake man, no need for the life story, explaining every detail of the piece sorts contextualizes the piece before you've even listened to it.
let your music do the talking. if it's good it dosnt need a interpriter writing essays on it and every single minute of it. a big long explanation can suggest that your not as good at communicating through music as you'd like to be and that you need to back it up with long stories. to make sure it;s listened to the right way.