Kickin beat, but almost no melody
the beat you have goin on here is really awsome, but other than that, this song doesn't quite have the melodic body it could. I hear a distant melody that seems to be stifled by some filter, but since it isn't that loud, it really doesn't help. I would say increase the volume on the melody or take off any filters that make it sound so light, then you would have a way better song here. Don't let the low score be disheartening, keep it up.