too soft >.<
your music is great, you just need to make it roar more. way too soft of sounds, too smooth as well. you rougher sounds. but thats just me. keep working on it, you should try using MAGIX Music Maker, much better system.
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I decided to start making more electronically themed music, and this is one of the fist songs i made after deciding to do so. I think it's pretty catchy, though the drum beats are kind of iffy. Every single part of this one and any other parts of my new album "double the luck of seven" are purely played on the keyboard, including the drumbeats! Comment, rate, criticize, and enjoy!
lidlurch responds:
do they have a demo with MAGIX music maker? i could try it out and see what i could do. yeah, i'll make a different, more hardcore version if i can, there just aren't that many instruments on garage band when it comes to that stuff. then when you make personalized instruments it goes really slow :P thanks for the review though! i'll keep that in mind, i'm editing ALL of my songs and i need all the help i can get :D
Awesome sounding, but has debatable value.
Everyone loves a song that please the ears. But you gotta remember that people wanna have the minds pleased too. I think the song sounds great, but IS it great? Not so much. Take it somewhere where people haven't taken it before. It just seems like one of those lame everyday techno songs where people toss in a melody and make it sound cool by warping up a sound.
Pros:
-Sounds cool.
-Good synth, all the instruments go really well together.
-Nice bass beat.
Cons:
-Just needs more feeling behind it.
-The song kinda does match its name, yet it kind of doesn't. But that's just my opinion.
-Abrupt ending. Wtf?
-This song ends with the exact same thing it started with, so by the end, it's sorta boring. Maybe you needa add more parts to this song.
lidlurch responds:
true dat, bro. it was a simple song that i really didn't work on too much i guess...though it was one of my first techno songs, so i'll make sure i master it soon enough. i will definitely make a second draft of this one
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It's pretty catchy, but nothing really special about it...
OMFG, PEOPLE GAVE BAD RATINGS?!???!????!!??!?!
This song is actually quite good. I dont see why people should be douches like that and give u ratings of 2.33?
lidlurch responds:
lol, thanks!! do you have any criticisms though? i really just want to work on improving my songs. i used garage band to make all my songs so i don't have much variety to work with in the electronic style, but this one is an exception ;) and btw, for the reviews? np bro, i really think it's only fair to review other people's stuff if you want your stuff to be reviewed you know?
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