Sorry about this one being so short xD. My old mac couldn't handle it being any longer, so i had to cut it short, but i think it sounds pretty cool. I messed around with the effects on the drums, and had a base for what kind of style of song i wanted to make. It doesn't really feel chaotic, however, that seems to be the only name to fit it :P. Anyways, comment, rate, criticize and enjoy!
pretty good
Ur song are musically interesting but a lot of isn't is head bopping. U should try to make some hard beats and brighten it up a bit. If you use brite synths, loud bass, and a fast beat ul be golden. try to make something that makes you want to dance.
I've been thinking about it lately and havn't gotten to it yet :P The song i'm making right now is pretty dang dark so it'll probably be a while...sorry, thanks though. I'm going to work right now, so i'll review some of your songs later tonight. thanks for the review!
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really trippy.
I can't say much though. There aren't as many elements in this song as some of your other songs.
i try to get around with my songs, but i've settled on one genera i think, so keep a lookout on my new songs, though it'll be a while before i get them done. i've got alot of editing to do on my other ones
feel
I like the sounds that you use. The reverb on the drums creates an airy, flowing sensation. But, some of the drum hits are a little too loud. I think that you need a stronger melody, even if only a hint of one, to give the piece a little more push forward. Overall, good work, nice sounds and vibe!
yeah, i really liked the effects i put on the drums in this one, and just using a simple beat really didn't matter when you have that many effects. i'll keep that in mind...once again, i don't know if i can do that much to this song considering that my comp can't handle it :P
It's got chaotic potential
Yes, it sounds a bit mellow and is short, but the mellow part around the middle leads to a hint that maybe there's a gloomy under-torrent that eventually leads to anger and explodes, covering everything in chaos. If you got another computer that could handle a longer version..?
No i don't....but i'm thinking that i could just set it up that way and not listen to it, then import it..maybe that would work? idk, are you suggesting that i go to a whole new melody?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
lidlurch 
