before 1:20, it is too repeditive, in the fact it needs to change more frequently, either than that, what you have is pretty good. Maybe even just make the drum beat switch up a bit, which sounds like some pretty generic drums. never use the generic drums, at the least just use 3 different generic drums, and attach them with the layer tool (one of the awesomest/simplest flash tools).
Baseline is nice and simple, and sounds great, the guitar sounds iffy, all the fl guitars do for that matter, if only there was a cure short of actual guitar recording, which can be tedious
actually, in your case, i would suggest maybe use even a midi guitar.
Ya, after listening a couple times, I would mainly suggest changing the drum beat up at least once in the song.
I got to this song by clicking the random audio submission, never done it before, thought I would give it a shot. And this song is good enough to make me look at the rest of your submissions, though I probably wont reveiw them.
geeze, submitted over 2 years ago, I wonder if you will ever read this....
lol yeah this was one of my first experiences with FL Studios. To be honest i still dont think i truly know how to use it lol. I have always been a fan of simple, yet catchy tunes but i like to hear a nice surprise here and there. Thank you very much for the review, i really was not anticipating to hear anything new about these old songs of mine.
Yet another great track
I am now looping this one, I think it took me 12 minutes before I wrote a review. I love the bells. Surely this isn't the first song you ever made. And if it is WOW. Anyway, as I am finished listening to all your tracks I impatiently await for you to upload more!
In a better mood... ty
Thank you for the comment, I'm very happy you enjoyed it. No it wasnt the first song i made but it was my first submission. As for new tracks i have uploaded a few more and a new one earlier today.
Thank you again,
like the drum beat.nice and simple. this wasnt the best song in the world. if you want an acoustic guitar, i dont suggest using slayer for it. not very good at all. but this song was decent. you got a nice feel and style for songs.
Thank you very much, for the comments and advice. Mainly what was doing in this one was trying out a few different ideas and melodies in my head at the time, i try to work with the insperation at the time and sometimes that means settling with what you have at the time.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.