not bad

before 1:20, it is too repeditive, in the fact it needs to change more frequently, either than that, what you have is pretty good. Maybe even just make the drum beat switch up a bit, which sounds like some pretty generic drums. never use the generic drums, at the least just use 3 different generic drums, and attach them with the layer tool (one of the awesomest/simplest flash tools).
Baseline is nice and simple, and sounds great, the guitar sounds iffy, all the fl guitars do for that matter, if only there was a cure short of actual guitar recording, which can be tedious
actually, in your case, i would suggest maybe use even a midi guitar.
Ya, after listening a couple times, I would mainly suggest changing the drum beat up at least once in the song.

I got to this song by clicking the random audio submission, never done it before, thought I would give it a shot. And this song is good enough to make me look at the rest of your submissions, though I probably wont reveiw them.
4/5
geeze, submitted over 2 years ago, I wonder if you will ever read this....

Yet another great track

I am now looping this one, I think it took me 12 minutes before I wrote a review. I love the bells. Surely this isn't the first song you ever made. And if it is WOW. Anyway, as I am finished listening to all your tracks I impatiently await for you to upload more!

JAG
In a better mood... ty

coo.

like the drum beat.nice and simple. this wasnt the best song in the world. if you want an acoustic guitar, i dont suggest using slayer for it. not very good at all. but this song was decent. you got a nice feel and style for songs.