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lol, hey man, i see it didn't get completely bombed! that is a success in it's self, lol. i'm glad i go to do a collab with you. thanks man.

Generic, but not bad

It sounds pretty generic, but maybe that's just because of the sounds you used. But the melody you created is very nice and pretty catchy. I got it stuck in my head, even though the song isn't playing anymore.

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nothing is out of sequence

...as far as i can tell, its perfect...
Great work
Review me back if u want :)

One beat out of sequence

Jeez, there's one part of the beat that is one note early / late in the timing - it sounds so out of place that I'd love to hear the song without it. If you got rid of this, suddenly the song would sound so much better, but this particular thing is really holding it back.

You've got a good melody and a decent counter melody that blends in nicely. I think that the wind effect that you throw across the tune as well helps it out so much, giving a new dimension to the song.

But it's that ugly bass beat that you've got. Don't lose the first one, it's good. The second one that you throw in after the song starts is the one to lose in this case.

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A bit generic

The beat was pretty good, so was the melody, but something about it sounded pretty generic and repetitive. Despite this, I could still listen to it easily without being bored or annoyed.

The fade out the end was pretty dull. Try and find more original ways to end your songs.

As a previous reviewer mentioned, there was a toe-tapping quality to it, and even though I wasn't that keen on it, I still found myself tapping along, although, knowing me, probably out of time:P

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