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ya shoulda kept the drums frum earlier going longer
then i could ive you a ten xD
good stuff tho
what do u use?

:) :3

good song. needs more bass and a nice strong beat. it is tooooo random. :P This is your R4R. thanks.

--Alix1

You have some good ideas!

Definitely some great ideas flowing here! My only suggestions would be to add more drums to keep the beat going and to try and make your transitions a bit smoother.