starts off strong and powerful. thats a mean kick you got there ;) as for the hat and clap, i cant say the same. sounds too generic. >:[ and the reversed cymbals are good, but a little too loud in the mix, and throughut the intro, im hearing crackles from the bass drum. minor mixing problem.
very nice hook you got there, that comes in at the 1:20ish area. its a pretty cool chordal melody. and the synth is pretty good for the goa-like style, though i think it could be tweaked a bit. try exaggerating the delay and reverb on that more. it comes out be a really nice progression.
as the song progresses the build up doesnt build up very well... not enough tension and energy going on by teh climax to make it feel very climactic. but you have a good concept goin on right now, so good job! i enjoyed it.
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