cool

starts off strong and powerful. thats a mean kick you got there ;) as for the hat and clap, i cant say the same. sounds too generic. >:[ and the reversed cymbals are good, but a little too loud in the mix, and throughut the intro, im hearing crackles from the bass drum. minor mixing problem.

very nice hook you got there, that comes in at the 1:20ish area. its a pretty cool chordal melody. and the synth is pretty good for the goa-like style, though i think it could be tweaked a bit. try exaggerating the delay and reverb on that more. it comes out be a really nice progression.

as the song progresses the build up doesnt build up very well... not enough tension and energy going on by teh climax to make it feel very climactic. but you have a good concept goin on right now, so good job! i enjoyed it.

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pretty good presentation

but waaaaaaaay too much reverb. it muddles everything up. good transitions. not much to talk about in terms of melody, but for what you were attempting it came out pretty well. but damn, too much reverb lol. generally you don't want to put reverb on a kick. if you want to achieve some sort of atmosphere, get a wind sample or something and play it in the background, probably high-passed.

10/10

Missing a catchy melody that i could hum to myself P:
but everything else is amazing
gj :]