If you review this, I'll review one of your songs too.
FUCK OFF YOU ZERO BOMBING FUCKS!! Just because your just a bunch of talentless fucks that are just some lonely fucking fat fuck who sits in your own shit all day everyday in your parents basement, doesn't mean you have to take it out on every fucking thing any fucking one submits. What do you think you'll gain out of pressing a button that says 0 on it, a noble piece prize? Your just someone who just sits on your computer all day everyday playing world warcraft thinking your 'uber cool' as your a level 200 and everyone is a 'n00b' compared to you. Just fuck OFF! And GET A FUCKING LIFE!!
I finally finished this bastard. Anyway, here's my go at adding vocals to BadMan's awesome track 'Eyes Of The Cemetary'. The only other person i know that has tried adding vox to this song is Schleif, check him out, he's awesome.
http://schleif.newgrounds .com/
And check out Bad man too:
http://bad-man-incorporat ed.newgrounds.com/
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Anyway, here are the lyrics:
Eyes of the cemetary
Step back and you will see
You'll see the enemy
Eyes of the cemetary
Your graves in front of me
Now you're the enemy
Come step into your grave
Now you'll fall right to hell
Your Corpse Is rotting in hell
Eyes of the cemetary
Eyes of the cemetary
Eyes of the cemetary
They are watching over you
They're watching over you
They're watching you
(Chorus)
Rotting flesh, Bloodshot eyes are all surrounding
Rotting Limbs smashing through the ground
Life's are plagued by this nightmare
This virus it plays your mind like a...game
Like a game
Life'll never be the same
Blood is spilt by your hands
Echoing off the floor
Blood Spilt From the living dead
Sweating from the fear
Life is nowhere near
Alone in the wilderness
Death around every turn
The dead walk through the streets
No longer can I survive
Eyes of the cemetary
Eyes of the cemetary
Eyes of the cemetary
They are watching over you
(Chorus)
(Solo)
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Please give me some constructive criticism. I neeed to improve, and I can't unless i get feedback from you guys.
Also, please don't vote 0 if you haven't listened to it, don't like the genre or if it's a score you don't thinks it's worthy of. You can't control other peoples opinions. Don't vote 0 to lower it as much as you can. Just vote what you think the song deserves, or not at all.
Thanks...
Stay Metal \m/
Netty
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alot of effects in this one, haha. sounds pretty good. really like the lyrics, good job. perhaps you should try working a bit on the vocal structure. all the lyrics makes your voice sound pretty strained and shit. but i like what you did to this one. good job!
Cheers man!
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Fucking wicked lyrics!! Very well done~!! I like it a lot!
Sounded pretty awesome all around.
I love the tone of your voice, too. WICKED. I didn't have much of the problem with the reverb. These style of vocals always need a little more ...I personally don't use reverb for this kind of style, I use echo. You should mess around with some echo settings, you will like the effect. :D
Anyways, yeah. Awesome.
Thanks for kickin some ass on this.
Current Score
3.85 / 5.00 (+ 0.39)
Thanks man! I got some reverb AND echo in this hehe
sounds ok
there's too much reverb on the vocals in my opinion. And as said below, your voice is too quiet. The lyrics are fine though.
I like alot of reverb tho, reverb is my thing :D
Thanks for the listen
Dark
You have passed the test, Andrews. I must say you did a fine job with the vocals (they are a tad quiet, though.) I have a tip for you. When you sing to a song later on, you should make your vocals lighter. I mean you should sing with your normal voice. Many artists have different ways of singing songs of their style. Take Drowning Pool for example. Their song "Bodies" has lighter vocals in beginning, middle, etc. And in other parts they scream. It's their style. As for you, God approves your existence.
Thanks man, appreciate the comments.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
netty-swobb 
