when you use repetetive lyrics
try not to use them too much, and if so, break it up a little by quickening the cuts and changing pitch so the listener doesn think theyre listening to teh same thing over and over.
and try not to have something repeat fro more than 1/10th of the max time, if the song is more than 30 secs long.
this song was thoroughly weird and i was saying "wat" throughout.
its good at parts, but if you can filter out in your head what is catchy and what is what doesnt need to be in the song, you can produce a gret track.
sometimes ill write a song that couldve been 10 songs, i just lose track a lot.
i was a tad creeped out by the begining but as it went on it did start to flow. in my opinion if you do a remix of this song i would get rid of the words in the begining. the crying part was also creepy but overall it was good.
repetative and weird
At the part with the lyrics at the beggining i was like "wtf??" then as it went on i was like "okay this is cool" then it just got super repetative. I guess it was okay, but not good in my opinion.
i personally think that it deserves better than a six, but i will take your advice, and try to work harder next time.