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Author Comments

song i made today, in reason, everything seemed to flow the right way, so it came out pretty good in my opinion, although i think i can do better, other than that, it may not sound special to anyone else, too much so, but to me, its special, i appreciate, reviews and comments opinions, etc.

Reviews


when you use repetetive lyrics

try not to use them too much, and if so, break it up a little by quickening the cuts and changing pitch so the listener doesn think theyre listening to teh same thing over and over.
and try not to have something repeat fro more than 1/10th of the max time, if the song is more than 30 secs long.
this song was thoroughly weird and i was saying "wat" throughout.
its good at parts, but if you can filter out in your head what is catchy and what is what doesnt need to be in the song, you can produce a gret track.
sometimes ill write a song that couldve been 10 songs, i just lose track a lot.



wtf............

i was a tad creeped out by the begining but as it went on it did start to flow. in my opinion if you do a remix of this song i would get rid of the words in the begining. the crying part was also creepy but overall it was good.



repetative and weird

At the part with the lyrics at the beggining i was like "wtf??" then as it went on i was like "okay this is cool" then it just got super repetative. I guess it was okay, but not good in my opinion.


wmckenna88 responds:

i personally think that it deserves better than a six, but i will take your advice, and try to work harder next time.

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Credits & Info

wmckenna88
Author

Listens
417
Downloads
30
Votes
7
Score
3.83 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 17, 2009
1:27 PM EDT
Genre
Drum N Bass
File Info
Song
6.3 MB
5 min 31 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.