Its ok, its actually pretty cool
The good things I like.I like the choir and violin. I like where you were going with this. I kinda like the melody and the song is kinda dark.
The problems I hear is the drum loop seems to cut off early in some parts. So in that case the drums loop just doesnt make a smooth transition to the next part. Around :30 you added some buzz sound; including another at 1:05 that really ruined it which I though didnt blend very while with all the other instruments. After a whie the clarity of the song gets really distorted. At some parts it sounded like there was just too much instruments not blending in.
Besides that its ok. Keep up the work.
It's not all bad
The beat sounded a little weird to me, it's a cool rhythm but it didn't sound right at some parts, I thought the melody was pretty cool, the choir stuff too. About up until 2:30 that's when things got really crazy and it just felt like i was listening to noise. So not terrible, but it could use some work. That's just my opinion on the song.
You should listen to the rest of my songs
This is terrible to listen to.
i'm afraid your score is low 2/5.
The sound are really ugly.
Well, most of them, some are good.
Anyway, i hope my opinion is not upsetting.
Just trying to be honest.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.