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Paradox (Bestial Remains)

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Jul 14, 2009 | 11:08 PM EDT
File Info
1.7 MB
1 min 50 sec
3.74 / 5.00

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Rated 3.74 / 5 stars
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Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal

Author Comments

This song was written by Kyle Crow for our band Bestial Remains.
Bass-Colt (FL Studio)
Drums-Colt (Beatcraft)



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Listened to the remastered

And while it was better, this one isn't bad. I really enjoyed the intro, and when the vocals began they surprisingly kept me interested in the rest of the song.

It's what a metal song should be and I believe you nailed for the most part. The ending didn't quite fit, but the main focus was on the metal itself. Overall it wasn't bad.

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Blackdoom13 responds:

Ok thanks for the review. I'm thinking about changing the ending sometime.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Sounds raw and unpolished

The intro is pretty nice. I like the riff that is played there. When the vocals set in I am tempted to turn off the song instantly. But I fought that urge back and I was rewarded with an unpolished but yet pretty cool song.
Because if I leave the overdriven guitars and drums aside then the song IS in fact a good one. Fast, uncompromising and brutal "in your face" metal. That's what I like (well, at least most of the time ^^)

I'll sure check out the remastered version of this.

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Blackdoom13 responds:

Ok thanks for the review. I'll try to make it better.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Too fragmented

I think that this 'song' needs a lot of work, as it sounds like there are 4 component parts that do not mesh together very well, if at all. This is where the mastering stage comes in, even for a thrash metal / death metal track like this, you need to put some effort into getting the pieces to work together and compliment each other.

The indiscriminate yelling into the mic is something that I won't be able to get you to change, but perhaps a few little tweaks of the lyrics themselves would help - there is no need to swear, as the emphasis is already there from the fact that you're yelling at the top of your lungs like some rabid dog.

Getting the guitar solo and the bass solo to play together would help - they sound like they are fighting and it's not the way to go. Get these parts working together and most of the battle is won.

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Blackdoom13 responds:

Umm Im sorry but your review didnt make much sense.
Um try listening to our remastered version of this song.
Maybe it will appease you more.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Bad vocals

It started off quite nicely, but when the vocals came in it went downhill. They seemed to be closer to talking than singing, and that wasn't because of the screamy quality. Either way, it just didn't sound good.

I think you could have made the guitar a bit louder, because there was a nice melody there, but it was overpowered by the drums and the vocals.

The endign was quite boring..Try to find more original endings than fading out. It just didn't work in a heavy metal song.

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Blackdoom13 responds:

Ok thanks for the review.
But try listening to our remastered version you might like it more.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Sounded great

Good job here man, really sounded awesome. Though I must say that I really liked the guitar, which sounded very awesome when played loudly like it was, and the solo at around 1:15 sounded cool too, good job with that.

The vocals sounded good as well, I felt that at some points it sounded a bit out of quality, but overall it sounded good.

The drums sounded awesome, very well played and they sounded so throughout the song.

The bass line sounded good as well, though it was hard to hear most of the time with all the other parts playing over it, but from what I could hear it sounded good.

The only real problem I had with this one would be with the quality of the song, at some times the quality was good, whereas in others it didnt sound so great, idk if that was me or what but it made the song sound kind of weird.

Good job here man, 4/5 from me, keep up the good work! :)

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Blackdoom13 responds:

Thanks man! Awesome review! But if you liked this one do yourself a favor and check out our remastered version!