You just used fl loop-presets! You didn't write this melody!
You do need some work, but I find it sounds amazing! And even if it is loops like some else said below, you still made them into a harmony so they sounded good.
Well thank you.
I'm glad you liked it.
...nothing else to say...it's a low quality song
Mediocre at best...
Not too crazy about it...it is really obvious that this is all looped together. There are a lot of things that are wrong with it...and I sure as heck don't know how your song made it this far.
With that being said: don't let all our negativity get you down. Come up with something that is original; start with a simple melody, a bass line, what ever and then build!
Listen my other songs! (except for 1 till 3, those are with preset loops)
Thanks for your review.
So you jam a bunch of premade loops together and make it to #15 of best tracks ever?
Sorry Newgrounds, I fucking quit.
I don't want to be completely negative with this review, I'll go ahead and suggest that you actually make your own material. That means NO presets. Don't take that as a personal attack, I'm simply suggesting that you don't claim another's work as your own.
It isn't my fault i'm the 15th place...
But you're right.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.