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[buyj3llo]-16/17

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I haven't been liking anything I make lately. I get halfway through a song, then fall out of love with it and leave it halfway finished. This track contains two unfinished songs, so if you hate the first one then just skip to the half way mark so you can hate the other one too.

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If you loved it at any point, someone else will too. Something that helps me is dialing everything back a bit from what I start with. Less is more, headroom is an instrument. But also I do the same shit, hate everything I make after so long, to date haven’t finished or mastered anything.

But also, this is like 11 years old and it’s still really good.

— Abraham Lincoln

Chips

1st
I love breakbeats, so i like this, chippy is repetitive and guy below is right with them. I could see how this would get old making after awhile, i would guess the chippies caused brain-lock lol. Once again, everything executed well (sounds, mastering/mixing) I think it needs some different stuff.

2nd
I like the change over. Garage-y sound here. Very ghetto with that bass. Sounds like 90's DnB sounds, actually this sounds like a DnB record from the 90's at 33 Speed not the 45 Speed - if you know anything about turntables. 4:12 is awesome, it just needs something, idk, good work though

good beats for both

the chip synth ringing thing gets super repetitive and annoying. would be better if you maybe treated it with some effects (like amp up the reverb slowly) to cause a build and then get rid of it completely. :)

the second part has a nice distinct drum pattern though since it seems to be the focus it would help if you changed it up a bit and had something unique to every bar (A1-A2-A1-A3-A1-A2-A1-A4 as an 8-bar pattern for example, only really 4 bars to fill out 8).

if you do feel like reviewing one of my tunes, please check out my newest one, Summer Solace ( http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/254789 ) :)

buyj3llo responds:

thanks for the review and the advice. The chip synth was a major problem with the song. Every time I tried to mess with it I ended up making it sound worse. So I took the cowards way out and just left it the way it is.

The beat in the second part is quite repetitive.

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Jul 13, 2009
6:35 PM EDT
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7 MB
5 min 7 sec

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