Wrote this in 2005 on Cubase. All instruments played by me.
Vocals aren't brilliant. I wrote it with the idea of the pressures of media following celebritys around and just making their lives hell.
Break Me Down
Take the truth and spin it around
Photocopy then spit it out
Everything you write so false
Photoshop in your fantasy
Make something stand next to me
Every word you wrote so false
And now I can't sleep at night
Can't turn out the lights
Won't let you out of my sight
Cos everynight I cry
Thinking of the lies
Always trying to break me down
Imagine the truth you want
Wave your magic wands about
Everything you wrote so false
Sell it to your world
Watch it all unfold
And now I can't sleep at night
Can't turn out the lights
Won't let you out of my sight
Cos everynight I cry
Thinking of the lies
Always trying to break me down
Break Me Down
Vocals, mix, etc.
The vocals sound isolated, and for a non-imposing voice such a yours that's not a good thing. It doesn't hurt sometimes to get your vocals deeper into the mix.
Guitar has a good riff but needs to be louder because it's overpowered by the drums.
These are simple fixes but they make a huge difference.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
deanoward 
