Pretty good

It sounds kind of generic to some other, but everything went well together and overall it is a good song.

Could use some variation

This is not *bad*, per se, but it could use something to distinguish it from a lot of the other techno/rave/trance/etc songs in the AP. It sounds awfully similar to any given number of them.

Mess around with chord progressions, melodic riffs and lines, and harmonies and such. In short, this needs a touch that says that you -and no one else- created this song. And that is the biggest complaint I have.

It's solid, but it feels like it has been done before.