Simple Things (WIP)

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Simple Things (WIP)

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Ok, this is something i was working on and didn't know exactly where to go with it until i came up with the idea that it would make for a great rap song. Now i suck at rapping. Bad. But i don't want this piece to go to waste, so i will finish it if someone is willing to make a rap using it. If you decide you want to use it, PM me and i will send you the FLP file. I used the Nexus, RealGuitar,and Edirol Orchestral VST's and VEC 1 and 3.

If you do make a rap with it, please use very limited cuss words (or none at all) and nothing about clubs, sex, or gangs. Thank you.

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dark-side13

2010-06-21 08:52:58

good but

it's good bot it could have been better if it wasent so repetitive

Funerium

2010-06-18 12:45:22

nice beginnings

nice but a little to repetitive, you can do a nice song from it

Drakedragon

2010-06-16 16:40:32

it can

it can both ways, to a song with a rapper behind it, or the rapper behind the music. but pretty much just a lil here and there of change, break. will do.

exAliceyuan2

2009-09-03 01:07:30

Can't agree with EquilibriumComplex more!

I am an instrumental person, too! The guitar is really attractive.
Well... In fact, since the situation is that you won't make a complete instrumental version if there is someone adapt this into a successful R&B song in a month, I have to say that I might pray that there won't be such R&B guy XD

Neurotangent

2009-07-12 01:53:22

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Doesn't need vocals, man. Instrumental hip hop is fine.

But that's just my opinion. I've always preferred instrumentals.

Very cool song. Loved the guitar. I suggest variation in that melody, though, it got a bit repetitive. Maybe counter melodies in spots.

Tilkanuts responds:

oh yeah, its FAR from finished, i just thought i would post it up and see if anyone would even take interest in it.
I know its repetitive but i made it that way with the idea of having vocals as the variation. I can easily make it non repetitive and do just as you said, make it an instrumental and remake the thing, but i thought maybe someone on here might want to use vocals on it. If no one does take interest within the next month or so i will highly consider making it an instrumental