You should reduce a lot of the squeakiness of the sounds your using. It actually hurt my ears to listen to the high pitched sample you have looped. Had to turn the volume down.
I like your effort though! Nice beat you got there. Try to give it more of a melody. That bassdrum could use some more "punch" too.
nice use of effect though. I can seriously imagine this song with a few slight changes, and it could be seriously awesome. Just need to get the basics down first.