Not too shabby. Needs more variation.

I like what you've got here. Not too bad. You've got some nice ideas running throughout this track that could use some expansion.

The synthwork in this is very well implemented. And the bass really adds to it. However, I feel it could be a little less repetitive. Your drums could use more work, but it's got lots of potential.

keep trying! What program are you using to make this? I know firsthand how steep the learning curve is with FL Studio, and I'm sure it's the same with other programs too.

Overall, I say nice work, but try to work out some of those issues with the repetitiveness.

PS. can you check out my latest track?