The ruthm was off, and there's only one track. Try to add some detail.
Simple, As you promised
First of all, Your song was at ny point any advanced, and it was boring after a while, but it also had a nice theme. It wasnt too big so i could live with it.
You say you have to use recording for everything, What program do you use for doing so?
Anyways, I suggest you keep going with your music, as long as you have the motivation, you will recive more of the skills.
-Review by Zellion/Zeth-
Thank you for the review!
I'm always dissatisfied how songs I make turns out on the computer, I should considering buying something real.
Currently I'm using something weird called "iPiano" to make the music. http://home.chello.no/~progress/ipiano.jpg
Thanks for the motiviation, I'll keep praticing :)