Alright, well, im going to review you, like you've been making music for years, so look out :)
ok the kick was way to soft. stay away from the drum loops, its kinda cheesy, try creating your own beats. very repetative, more variation. dont use the fl vocals, most of the time, if used plainly (no delay, or slicing) its very boring, and also cheesy. just an arp, the whole time, is also boring, you'd want to develop a melody, and put a trancy'ier sound in for the arp, or set the arp in the background, and for the bg arp, to compliment the main melody. hope this helps :)
Hey, thanks for the review.
Just took your advice and pumped up the kick x100%, and it shouldn't be "as" repetitive in the final version, i moved it around a bit. I'm trying to learn how to do vocal slicing, i wanted to do an effect on the "one", but that might take a while.
Thinking about adding my own vocals as well, but im not sure how I could incorporate it into this type of song. I'm more of a classic rock guy who barely listens to techno, so i guess i'll have to do some researching.
Anyways, thanks again for the review, i'll be using yer advice.