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Jul 10, 2009 | 6:06 AM EDT
File Info
4.5 MB
4 min 58 sec
4.22 / 5.00

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Rated 4.22 / 5 stars
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Scribbles of precipitation pouring from this cloud I call my brain, nothing but gray and white matter waiting to explode.

You're my happiness that eloped with time
everything seems still and dead without you
though I can still hear your acquiesce chime
not to your acquiesce do I accrue
The pendulum which is called my thoughts swings
I am half the nothing I was before
I'm flying through the cosmos without wings
Venus laughs at me while mars provokes war
You are the ball and chain, holding me down
the quicksand in which my senses fall slow
The further I go, the more I am bound
A pain that's forced upon me, not bestowed
You are the rebel shadow, fast asleep
When you finally wake, I'll cease to weep!



Rated 4 / 5 stars


Nice tune! Laid back beat. I like it. The only thing is, it sounds to far in the back. Its to muted. And there are alot of glitches in the sound, where the sound just "cracks". You made it sound like a live recording, although if the drums are live you got a crappy drumset, or atleast get some new symbals :P Other then that it has a nice flow, the screaming in with the singing isnt really my thing, but it worked. Nice track!
Greets, Chris

jewcurls responds:

Thanks Chris, the drums are just a program so they aren't too good and this was more of an experiment of sounds with my new Digitech Whammy 4 pedal.
Thanks for the review


Rated 5 / 5 stars

I boat five, this is a beeview.

This beeview discusses the lack of a "boat 5" option, and that this song would get one if there was. It's coolio.

jewcurls responds:

Thanks you to za Beeeeeet alls Fair eeeeeee. Thank you for considering boating five and for the coolio remarks.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


Pink Floyd-esque, I believe. Congrats.

jewcurls responds:

Why thank you kind Lizard and or Wizard, I am amazingly stunned at the kindness of your review.
Yours Sincerely, Jewcurls