Choppy
Sorry. Couldn't carry through listening.
It was choppy and unaesthetic.
Author Comments
This is my first attempt at making a song with fruityloops. The song is from a REALLY old PC game by Terminal Design and Microsoft called 'Fury3'. It's a flier game where you obliterate beings called the Bions which are trying to control a series of planets. You travel to each of these planets, kill every enemy in sight, blow up a couple planets and save the Galaxy.
This particular song is from the first planet you visit, which I am assuming is the Human home planet Terran. The Bions attempt to colonize Terran, so you have to demolish the buildings they have begun to construct and blast the demolition robots trying to destroy Terran cities.
Try again! I see potential!
Personally, I think the original is better despite the low sound quality it had. This has too many sounds going on, not exactly consistent with itself. I do like the background, though. I just wish the treble was something to smile at... I also feel that this needs to be faster, though it may be the overcast feeling that slows it down more than the actual tempo. I really hope that you try this again. This was my favorite piece from fury 3, and I'd love to here what it'd sound like in high quality. By no means does that mean copy directly, but I strongly recommend strengthening the foreground, using less "squeaky" sounds and buzz-tones, and ditch the quote at 0:53. I think this has potential.
Wolfen150 responds:
Hey thanks. This was my first piece I've ever done, mind you, and I do plan to redo it, I just need motivation because I did this with the demo therefore could not save it. This one was really just throwing some things together; I didn't really try to hard and only spent about an hour or two on it.
Btw, I love fury 3 music and plan to remix more tracks from it. I've already done Tiamat but I plan to do Sebek next, although that one will be a bit of a challenge.
hey,
not bad. not bad at all. better than my first song, thats for sure.
Wolfen150 responds:
Thanks. ^^ I'm sure I could have made it better if I was able to spend more time on it. I'm definately going to buy FL at my next paycheck.
lol, its that one vote
personally, it doesnt diserve a Perfect score, but its not that bad
Wolfen150 responds:
Hearing 'its not that bad' I'd have to say is a good thing since this is my first try. Thanks for your review and rating. ^^
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- 2 min 45 sec
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