It's good, the intro is really good, but hte main melody seems kind-of... hollow? It needs something to fill it up more, maybe some type of low pad synth, or some strings, and a percussion. Other than theat it's good, kind of makes me think of someone starting on a long journey.
Again, I rate based of technical and feeling, feeling is doubled added with technical, divided by three. So, 9/10 for feeling (the energy build up at the beginning, but then seemed to stay at a plateau with no more build up or break-down) and 7/10 for technical (seemed a little too simple and complex). so that rounds to 8/10.
Keep up the good work you've got talent! (I see you changed you're other song to my suggested name :D) anyways, cheers!
smooth...the song not you!
I like the build up in the beginning...I think if you try to improve this you will ruin it...like my music teacher told me "if your happy with a creation, leave it alone and learn from your mistakes"
Thanks! It's good to know at least you like my music! :D