Great song! I like the intro and the parts in the middle when the beat changes after someone talks.
It's hard to say whether I like it or not. The intro is a good idea, but it seems kind of cheesy. Likewise, when the song actually takes off it's really cool, and it could probably hold its own without the Fight Club material, if it were a minute or so shorter. All in all though, good work.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.