This is definitely a better version of your original, which although is still a wonderful melody, but a lot better not only in quality but in intensity.
It sounds a lot more driven, the same melody as the previous Castlekill, but this one has more verve, and can kill the charts around the world if people heard this.
I would say this can definitely be part of a Trance Dance exclusive for either this Winter or next year, because people would def love the high tempo and the consistency of your melodies- always a plus when people hear this.
Please keep up the wonderful work. Let me know if there's an album coming out soon!