I'm Download'n again!!!!
good use of the tamberine sound!
heheh! Thanks heaps man its always good to know u like my songs!!! ^_^
Well, the kick seems really really distorted. The trancy parts took too long to come in, I would also have chosen a different arp, because it sometimes feels like the notes are out of tune. is it a detune arp? everything seemed a bit streched, like not enough variation. when the trancy stuff came in, it didnt feel much like trance at all. maybe add in some percussion- kicks, claps, snares, and high hats. the song felt shallow, so maybe a nice pad, synth, or choir in the background would help. then the ending wasnt very special. the song also felt a bit slow too. the high hat, with the fast beat, felt more like a hip hop song than a trance song :/ use some happy poizone arp instead of the detune one. (that i mentioned up above)
nice observation! however i didnt use an arp at all.
The song did have a kick and hats.
I create alot of songs that sound a bit hip hoppy for my mate michael (Mc Rumbles) to do his rapping over.
But all in all i like your suggestions, ill definiately have to fiddle around with this one a bit.
Thanks heaps for the review and the vote!!!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.