really good for a first song!
I will not constructively criticize a first song. I hate doing that.
I like to leave it the way it is so that people can see that "this was my first song" and "look how I have improved from my latest song". To tell you the truth, my first song was too bad to be put on newgrounds. It sucked so badly I almost deleted it but didn't. 53 seconds long.
5/5 >>>>>>>> (remember the deal)
7/10 for the song itself.