Well first of all, you should really filter out your melody. The whole time i was waiting for a low pass filter to come on, but nothing T_T. So add a low pass filter for your intro, and just let it rise up. Also it does get quite repeative, try altering the melody up abit and only have it play for about 12 - 16 bars then start up new melody. Also use synths that sound more interesting and less boring. The drum sounds you chose for this song were also really boring too. So change that up. Add better sounding ones =). Also add in some rolls and fills to variate the song.
Umm... thats really i can think of. Hope this review is helpful in some way to you. Good luck on future projects man. Keep it up.
But for now,