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Got stuck with this song. Can't figure out what to add on next, or if i should even bother finishing it. Any ideas?

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blarg

coming from making music for about 7 years in a metal band. [im a drummer..so get ready]

the intro is way too long, but at the same time its not. keep the drums in there, but keep them fast, dont mach the snare and hi hat to the guitar..that just sounds like crapy. you dont have to match everything, thats what makes music so good. you can switch it up and make is fucked up, but it will still be awesome. you have a GREAT riff, thats for damn sure. and a good idea, you can make this 4 minutes, just keep at it, keep it up.
5/5

Muffled.

I like it, although it all sounds a little muffled throughout the instruments. I do like the pauses you have placed in the drums to make the guitar you used in the beginning stand out. I especially like how shit starts speeding up around 1:00! but it kind of dwindles away into nothing.
It may just be me but when i start rockin i dont like to stop haha!
Needs a few adjustments but im sure you'll turn this into a beast :)
8/10
5/5

Noopilk responds:

Thanks for the review! Now that I listen for it, I see what you mean about the muffled instruments. I'll be sure to fix that. Thanks for the support, anywho.

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Uploaded
Jul 8, 2009
7:28 PM EDT
Genre
Heavy Metal
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1.8 MB
1 min 19 sec

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