I'm likin the beat on this one, and the shape of ths song with the multiple pieces is motherfucking beautiful. However, the voice bit sounds like shit, which you explained. Maybe take it down an octave and stamp some effects on that, but idk. I'm no mix-doctor :P. It's the song's one major flaw. besides that, I can dig it. props.
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