Really good for a first.
If this is you're first attempt at good techno, then I can't wait to here you're music a few months from now.
This song is really good, the introdduction is smooth, and draws you into the song, the beat is energetic, and the melody is vibrant and sinuous. It was tad repetitive, but hey! other than that the song was great.
I rate based off of feeling (how it makes the listener feel, and how well it does that), and technical assets. feel is doubled, added with technical rating, and the final is divided by three for my overall score. I give this song 9/10 for feeling ( it was energetic), and 9/10 for technical assets (tad repetitive, but smooth energetic beat and melody). So 9/10 overall.
Great job! keep up the good work, and good luck to you both musically, and generally :D !
Ooh, and just one more thing. I suggest you change the name, it doesn't really suit the song, and isn't very techno-esque. I think you should name it Sustained Flight, or Unstoppable, but maybe that's just me.
Wow! Thanks! It means a lot that you took the time to do all that! :D And yes i wasn't sure about the song name either and will probably change the name to something like your suggestions!