wtf?

what is that beginning?

Eh.

It was 'decent.' Nothing to much to say about it. The beats were wayy off, but as you said, you are only using a demo. That said, i'd give it a 5. Not much you can do with demos. It's decent. Starting at 00:37 it seems to run together and become a bit of mush, to say. Other then that, no real problems that can be solved with a demo. I dislike the sound used, too. :/

-_-

It has potential, but was not great, and basically only ever had one thing ging on at once.

But sill,
3,
Butterscotch, Yo!

dude, it kinda lacs

the flow of the song was jes beat up, lol

not great

i didnt like it. its fine i guess - except for that theres no tempo, rythym or anything.
seriously, buy a metronome, or at least, my keyboard has one built in. so yeah... could be good.