It's definitely better than what I've composed myself. (I usually do arrangements, not original compositions). Anyway, good job. I agree with you; a real guitar would sound better, but I too am stuck with no recording gear. I'm also not that good, but I've got friends who are.
Also, I recognized the Slayer plug-in the moment the music started. Yes, I use FL.
Dude FL Slayer sucks balls, I use it too when I want to remember a nice riff or two, but its just crappy sounding...not saying that you're thing is bad because I'm sure this would sound pretty nice on the guitar. The thing I was most impressed with here was the drums, great, no, fantastic job on the tom fills and the outro.
Thanks mate! It's always awesome to hear some good feed back. but ya, i agree with you, slayer's not very good lol. I really just wish i could upload real guitar, I have 8 years of guitar experience after all :P ya, my brother is drummer to, so i've learned a few tips from him.