Not too crappy!
Lyrics are really really poor-I advise not repeating the same thing over 4 times-something that The Police do a lot. The lyrics don't really make sense to me, probably because I can't hear it over the drums and Sax. That's another thing. The drums/drummer doesn't seem to be in beat the whole way through... like he/she got lazy with it. Saxophone sounds fine. I want some more of the bass/guitar it sounded good in the end, why didn't I hear it in the mid? Learn what you can about recording because it sounded really shallow/from another room-it wasn't clear enough.
Overall, I really like your work, it needs a lot of touching up, but it could become on it's way to becoming something fun to listen to. BTW, you ain't getting my bike-it's a 28-speed, and probably too tall for you : )