First Draft

While you did a good job on the remix, I simply liked the better one. I know people asked for it to be longer, but you hit the nail on the head with the first draft. This whole cross-fading business is a little out of place on occasion (01:45 for instance).

I still like your older one better. It was short enough not to overstay its welcome, and fit nicely into my playlist. But because I know you're trying to please people (which is where you went terribly wrong), I'll give you a B for effort.

8/10; 4/5

Amazing

Reminded me of a symphonic industrial kind of thing. I loved you pounding beats.
Nice job.

Great song.

Ah thats a nice song. As musicians we must give order to music, and this song has order! Sounds very mechanical and yet still classical. I think that it sounds like a factory, constantly making machines.

Very Cool...

This is great, and I like it a lot. One thing though, you need to automate the delay you have going on. It has a great effect in some areas, but not such a good one in others. So automating it to be present some of the time, but not always would go a long way into making this sound better.

Some areas it just becomes muddy with the echo. Other than that though, this is really great. Almost perfect to my ears, just tweak the delay you are using.

Oh and the new intro section is AWESOME!

5/5 and 9/10 overall. Very nicely done bud!

-Gravey-