While you did a good job on the remix, I simply liked the better one. I know people asked for it to be longer, but you hit the nail on the head with the first draft. This whole cross-fading business is a little out of place on occasion (01:45 for instance).
I still like your older one better. It was short enough not to overstay its welcome, and fit nicely into my playlist. But because I know you're trying to please people (which is where you went terribly wrong), I'll give you a B for effort.
hey there again...thanks for your honesty...and review
Reminded me of a symphonic industrial kind of thing. I loved you pounding beats.
Hello there GeneralJ...thank you for taking the time to review and your score is much appreciated. I am glad you get the whole industrial vibe. Peace YO!
Ah thats a nice song. As musicians we must give order to music, and this song has order! Sounds very mechanical and yet still classical. I think that it sounds like a factory, constantly making machines.
Thanks Stargenx for the review and score. Thanks for getting it.
This is great, and I like it a lot. One thing though, you need to automate the delay you have going on. It has a great effect in some areas, but not such a good one in others. So automating it to be present some of the time, but not always would go a long way into making this sound better.
Some areas it just becomes muddy with the echo. Other than that though, this is really great. Almost perfect to my ears, just tweak the delay you are using.
Oh and the new intro section is AWESOME!
5/5 and 9/10 overall. Very nicely done bud!
WooHoo....someone finally gets it. Thank You for the great review...again. I know what you mean about the delay. I took the original burned version and broke it down in the mixer. Burning the instrumental by itself again and made two other separate parts...then pieced them altogether. Then I added to the pre-edit to get the new lengthier piece. There was a drum slam at the end that missed the edit...I have no idea how that happened, but it is so cool you liked it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.