Learn to rap
And write lyrics. Saying the N-word in every verse doesn't up your cool.
being gay doesnt up YOUR cool
First of all. You sound like you're ten. If you want people to respect you and take your "music" Seriously then you should make yourself sound older.
Second add better background music to it. Having someone beatbox in the background won't cut it. I'm sure you can find something off the internet to put in the background.
Last Just because your score is Very low doesn't mean it was zerobombed. You can't blame others for you making bad music.
Seriously, you sound like your 12. and you try to beatbox, and it sucks. you sir, deserve an ANGRY FAIC! >:(
you suck more
YES MORE MUSIC!
I love these raps!
Why do you even try? You fail horribly.
your just jealous
zerobombing dude.. you music sucks and you can't rap and what's wrong with you're voice? this is crap
fuck you zerobomber douche
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