Vocals and the loop behind it are great but felt like they were off at times, though that could just be the guitar messing with my ears. I think if you take another look at the guitar it could be better. It sounds in the beginning like it'd be something ZZ Top plays. The style gets better with the guitar as the song progresses, but it sounds off. Drums could use some more intensity in my opinion, but at the least they need to be looked at in the beginning. A bit off with the loop.
I agree, I intentionally broke the rhythm in order to create tension
I love that voice :)
SWEET!!! I wasn't sure if you would like it =) So far it's just you and my buddy josh that like it
The first guitar's distortion (which was more like intense overdrive) didn't really fit.
Also, the sparse drums in the beginning weren't really syncopated to the synth so it sounded awkward.
Unfortunately most of the song didn't seem to fit together, it kind of tripped on itself, as if there were just too many tracks in there. Try cutting down the number of tracks and focusing on those really complimenting each other first, then adding back less "necessary" tracks and seeing where it starts becoming too much .
Meh, I was trying to emulate a similar band. Lol, uh, yah, don't worry about it. lol