Nice!

For a first drum and bass this is awesome. The part that starst at 0:46 is a bit annoying. I can tell you worked really hard on this one and you get alot better at DnB if you keep at it.

Ok, First Off...

Don't ever use the preset vocals from the Fruity Loops library. It simply ruins everything in a song, because it screams noob. I'm not hating, just stating the facts.

The song itself is pretty interesting for a demo. The beats are very intense, and the synths aren't bad. Although they are mainly presets, which you should look into fixing. I'm not so much a hater of presets, but you gotta make them unrecognizable if you use them. Because people will down vote your song for using them.

There are hundreds if not thousands of free sound fonts and VSTs out there you can use. Ya just gotta look for 'em. :-)

The different sections are really cool how they contrast with each other. You were able to make them flow into each other very nicely too. And that is so important. There has to be a good flow in a song for it to work, and this flows pretty well in my opinion.

Overall I like it. But the Fruity Loops presets are making it hard for me to give you a great score. Soooo...

4/5 and 7/10 overall. A good score, but not quite great. And right now I think that is about where this song stands. Good, but not quite great.

-Gravey-

for a first drumnbass release

I wouldn't call yourselfself infectious when ur still learning the ropes of the style. Thats just my opinion mate. I like some of the stutter effects and the reece is nice and crispy. As i listen to this i don't immediately feel like its a drumnbass track so my advice is to keep it up..study the style...I dont wanna sound like a prick but honestly that vocal sample does not add to the song.

waiting for the final

some parts were awesome and some parts threw it off a little bit for me but otherwise very nice for an unfinished piece.

Very good

If this is unfinished then i will definatly wait for the finnished one. keep it up.