A little bit of advice...
don't up the ton next time, it just kind of ruins it, but I must admit, you had a decent choice of nstruments
Way too high pitched. It feels like a bad carnival tune.
I like the effort to create a song this way, but you should really listen to the song again.
You had the wrong keys for the song. Good attempt though.
Keep at it
I'll give you too stars for effort because I'm in the same boat as you. Funny casue I've been here at new grounds since 2004 and i just got an account and this was the 1st song I remixed. IT just doesn't sound right....distorted if you will.....Can't quite place my finger on it
lol... looks like i'm not alone :D