Oh, well excUuUuUuUuse me then. . . .
Man, oh, Man, I don't even know what to say. You put an amazing song up for people to listen to and then you torture us by ONLY wanting feckin' PROfessionals reviewing you? WTF kind of bullsheit elitism is THAT?! You can't stop ME, Pal. I'm here dayumit and I'm gonna review you (as the lowly uneducated Woman I AM)! Hell, I'm even currently unemployed, so I'm ACTUALLY the OPPOSITE of a professional! Does that make you mad? Heh heh heh Anyhoo, to the review and enough taunting from the Peanut Gallery.
This piece is really well put together, Nedachi! I'm not sure if I know (or even SHOULD recognize) the sampling in the background though. Your beat is tight and around 0:21 or 0:22 it really gets bangin'. Ha, I just said bangin'. See what your song did to me? What have I become? I've listened to this, like, at LEAST 9 times consecutively looped and I have YET to get sick of it. All I can say is you really have a knack for piecing things together nicely Man. I hope to hear things from you for YEARS to come! Until we next meet. . .
............Take care, be good and stay bangin'.period
I'm not professionnal, but i think you just have to put more brightness on cymbal when bass is off, add more hitting snare, put more break in the tracks, and it will be a good dnb track. The bass is perfect.
this is allready a very good job.
This is most definitely worth more than a score of 2.39... I love the drums; perfectly fragmented but still kept a nice beat and there was a good amount of variation. I also really love the quirky bass, however if I were you I would have brought the bass's treble forward a bit. The voice samples suit it well, however make sure you don't over do it for the rest of the track. I'm looking forward to the full version.
I know you wanted "professional" advice... but screw you. :) You can't stop me from reviewing this.
I was humbly wondering If you would have a listen of one of my tracks. "All Over Your Face" on my user page. I would greatly appreciate someone like you reviewing it.
Thank you buddy :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.