ding ding ding
got a progressive feel to it. i like it, im chillin out over here man.
nice job on the bass, fat and flowing.
like the melody aswell, some happy feelgood ding-donging but i like it.
personally think it doesnt need lyrics. sounds full enough to me.
anyway, if this is a first go, you still did a pretty friggen good job man. i can hear it somewhere though, i guess there's not alot of really original effects or breaks or patterns you're using.
but if you'd dive deep into the genre you might have a few masterpieces comin out your fruity pooper. i mean looper. or loops. riiight...